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 |  Subject: Ronaldinho  Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:00 am | |
| Sig of the new Milan player!  V1 (and yes, i know i spelled 'choice' wrong, but im too lazy to change it)  V2  V3  | |
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| | Subject: Re: Ronaldinho Thu Jul 17, 2008 12:05 pm | |
| Well its alright mate but you can do better. I think the colour should definitely be more ywllow as the blue doesnt really fit at all. The text could be better on all of them imo too, although the last one looks best. I think maybe it should be a bit rippled or something, well thats what i would try. The render effects look nice and the textures are very nicely used. The shadow render fits well but his face looks too dark on the main render, i think you should add some nice lighting effects. The border is nice. But (yes im picky!) the top isnt the same as the bottom  Is this intentional lol. KIU | |
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| | Subject: Re: Ronaldinho Thu Jul 17, 2008 1:19 pm | |
| Fine Sig Mate But You Can Do Much Better IMO,The BG Is Too Simple For Me Not Really Fitting The Style,The Render Work Is Fine,The Blue Colour Looks Okay But Add Some Yellow And Some Of Those Line Textures Aren't Fitting That Well,The Lighting Work Could Be Better His Face Looks Very Dark,The Text Needs Alot More Work Keep It Up Mate! | |
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