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|  Subject: Re: Van Der Vaart // RobBenko  Wed Jul 23, 2008 11:06 am | |
| It looks alright mate but i think it could do with somne more contrast? Theres not much colour there really. Thr lighting looks nice, simple, but maybe a bit too overdone around the render again. And theres not much blending there, either. Render looks ok but imo a bit LQ and as i said i think you need better colour. Text is really nice. BG is nice but i think you should use a few more textures it looks quite plain. kiu | |
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| | Subject: Re: Van Der Vaart // RobBenko Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:55 pm | |
| Thanks for the comment, I think I need to work on the lighting around the render!  | |
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| | Subject: Re: Van Der Vaart // RobBenko Wed Jul 23, 2008 4:11 pm | |
| Yeah Fine Sig Mate,The BG Looks Really Nice IMO Maybe Add Stadium Or Shadow Render,The Render Looks Okay It Needs More Orange Lights,The Blending Could Be Better,And As You Say The Lighting Is Way Too Overdone,But I'm Sure You'll Improve On That,The Text Could Be Better I Don't Really Like The Font Keep Practicing Mate!  | |
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| | Subject: Re: Van Der Vaart // RobBenko Wed Jul 23, 2008 8:38 pm | |
| Comment appreciated! I'll keep working at it! | |
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