_aK
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| Subject: *Scholes Mon Jul 28, 2008 1:41 pm | |
| I'm not too sure on this one, again its for my desktop and i tried to make it look like he's moving through the city... | |
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Air¹ Kings
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| Subject: Re: *Scholes Mon Jul 28, 2008 1:44 pm | |
| I like it mate, its a very clever idea SAnd if u look close you can see him through the city. But one part I can't stop loving is Scholes in the background! damm thts some nice effects lol. The main render is nice mate:D good effects, I love the ornage circles round it mate, good and really bright. The city idea is great but I think you need to make a bit more visible if ya know wht i mena, THe text is ok but it doesn't look much like main text but its good. Nice wall mate:D | |
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lebthug23 Moderators
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| Subject: Re: *Scholes Mon Jul 28, 2008 2:05 pm | |
| good wall mate.. not one of ur best tho imo the render and render fx look good and fit really well, the bg is ok the text lets it down tho...uve done better mate.. keep them commin! | |
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.Tiempo Kings
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| Subject: Re: *Scholes Mon Jul 28, 2008 5:26 pm | |
| Fine wall mate,really clever work imo but it could be executed alittle but more imo,the city in the bg looks really classy,the render is nice,but some of the textures there look alittle overburned the sub render looks good maybe desaturate it tho,the text could be better i don't really like the font,keep it up mate,your improving alot! | |
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_aK
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| Subject: Re: *Scholes Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:07 pm | |
| i was contemplating removing the text all together, but decided to leave it... i dont really like it either. | |
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