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 |  Subject: hleb,  Sun Aug 10, 2008 2:06 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: hleb, Sun Aug 10, 2008 2:38 pm | |
| It's Really Simple Mate .. The BG Is Way Too Plain .. Add Some Nice textures In There .. And Lighten It Up A Little .. The Render Needs A Lot Of Work .. Try Some Effects And Blending Mate .. And Work With Some Colors And Light Textures .. The Text Is Bad .. It Needs Lighting And Better Font .. The Line Does'nt Fit Under It .. Keep Working Mate .. Stay Active ..  | |
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| | Subject: Re: hleb, Sun Aug 10, 2008 3:30 pm | |
| Not bad mate but very simple,the bg needs work the wooden texture doesn't work that well these days imo,so try something different,the render again too simple needs some effects and texture work,the text needs wokr keep at it mate and i'm sure you'll improve!  | |
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