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 |  Subject: Robinho||New Style  Sun Mar 16, 2008 9:24 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: Robinho||New Style Mon Mar 17, 2008 11:04 am | |
| The BG Is Too Simple Imo Mate...The Stadium Is Nice....But You Should Make That Smaller...And Destuate It....Then Put It At A Lowere Ocpacity ... And Try Bledning It A Little Mate....And Add Some Nice Dark Textures In There....But Don't Overdo Them...Keep It Nice And Clean....The Lighting Work Looks Very Nice Mate..The Render Is Also Too Simple Mate.....The Effcest Need Work...Experiment A Little With Some Simple , But Effective Effects.....And Again Dont Overdo It....And Also Try Blending The Render Into The BG Mate....Use Some Light Textures Too .... And A Few Nice Brushes...Around And On The Render....The Colours Are Okay..But Could Be Worked On More Mate...The Text Is Really Simple Mate....Try New Fonts....Keep Practisng Mate....You Will Improve...  | |
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| | Subject: Re: Robinho||New Style Mon Mar 17, 2008 12:17 pm | |
| i know this work is simple.thanks the comment, I employ it | |
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| | Subject: Re: Robinho||New Style Mon Mar 17, 2008 1:06 pm | |
| Well mate as i said you, i know you can do better The background is very simple, it's okay but it needs alot i'd say, same goes for the render, fine blending but the rest needs some work too. Text is good, but doutful how much i feel it fits in mate. Keep it up! | |
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