To me, it looks kinda' unfinished.
The render is alittle boring, and the effects, textures, brushes what ever, needs to be in the front of the render.
The bg looks too simple for me. Put in some textures or pics.
The text looks nice. I accuatly really like the text
And make the border black, or something.. The white one dosnt really work
Work some more on it, and it will be really nice