.Reno~ Avatars~

Heres the first one. Im not sure but is this a new style with the text?

very nice but text in bad :S

Nice ava The contrast work could be better. The balls too bright imo. And you could zoom out a bit from the picture and the text don't suit sorry. Lighting works nice though Kiu!

LeGeND-MæN wrote:

very nice but text in bad :S

More constructive mate, help him improve the 'bad' text, maybe giving some suggestions or some hints why you think it is bad

- Anyway mate, i got kinda mixed feelings for this one, it's a good idea. But i think your blur makes the picture look a little low quality, i think it would fit better with a sharp picture here Also the skin color looks burned, i think you saturated it a little too much mate. - The texture use is quite good, i like the right one, making a bit balance, and giving a smooth effect!
Also the text is a good idea mate, but i think you can pull it off better, merge the text more into the picture, and so
Anyway, cheers mate. Keep it up, looking forward to see more from ya!

Tried to do something with the same pic



What do you think of it?

BTW i used vuvu's new tut, thanks

Good improvement, the colors is better i think, although it look a little dull
- The text still looks a little overdone, i think it would be better without actually but if you want it, i think you will need to fit it better in - Anyway, its better than before mate.
Cheers, keep it up!

Thanks, i'll see if i can improve more after a few more comments.

Nice work mate alot better than your first try at the deco one Colours though could be better for a start the red seems to strong and doesnt quite fit over the face maybe add the red on the left side near the ball. Light work is ok but blur it more and make it stronger imo. Text is nice though fits really well KIU

Nice work mate. Looks much better than your fist try. Colours could be better but still seems good the red is a bit strong. Add red near the ball or on the ball. Light work is good but blur it. Try to make it stonger. Text is nice good font and nice style and it fits really well. KIU mate

Well thanks for the comments guys, i happy with it so i am not going to change it.

New one.



This is my style, what do you think of it?

It is ok mate. But the Deco is defo still better mae. The green dosen't really fit imo. The text is ok. There is something on villa's face take that off make the ava look bad. KIU mate

Its his number 7 on his face, just tried something different, thanks for the comment

Well maybe put the 7 somehwere else mate i think it would look much better
Add some lighting effects by the way.

New Avatar:

http://www.player-art.com/forum/image.php?u=6788&dateline=1214753622

Comments, Maybe my best?

nice icons mate..
i think no need text there..

Nice work there mate maybe a little blurry though and add some more light work KIU

NEW:



Thanks to vdv's 3rd tutorial, comments.

Nice work mate Imo too contrast. Texture is nice. Add more light spots and make the less contrast Kiu mate

Looks cool mate.
As Rob says, it's maybe a little too contrasted, but not much!
The textures is fine imo and the light looks cool.
But mate, if you want to obtain more on this, try take more time on the placement, maybe place him a little higher and zoom a little more in, it will work wonders, and that's what makes a great ava
Cheers!

Nice work mate although try making it smoother and simple mate KIU