Not bad mate
Render seems a little simple and to like saturated and dull tbh
Try keeping it plain and then look at some like mode tutorials because the outcome isnt that good tbh also add more stronger light work and textures mate
Not to sure about the clipping mask mate but kinda fits well imo
Borde is porr though looks bad enough with just clipping mask but the bottom one is bigger than the other mate
Anway KIU