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| | Subject: Re: Carlos Vela//Mexico//.SIN Sat Jun 28, 2008 4:09 pm | |
| It looks ok mate but its quite busy. There is too much in the BG imo, it should be simpler seeing as the main focus is supposed to be on the render. The render looks ok, is a bit big though. Effects and clipping masks look pretty nice. Text could be better- i dont like the stroke or the brushwork behind it really. kiu mate | |
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| | Subject: Re: Carlos Vela//Mexico//.SIN Sat Jun 28, 2008 4:12 pm | |
| Not Bad Mate,Too Messy Overall Tbh.The BG Looks Quite Bad Darken The Edges.The Brush Work Is Far Too Messy Reduce It.The Render Effects Look Fine Maybe Oversharpened Tho,The Text Is Out Of Place And Doesn't Look Great,Keep At It Mate!  | |
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| | Subject: Re: Carlos Vela//Mexico//.SIN Sat Jun 28, 2008 4:15 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Carlos Vela//Mexico//.SIN Sun Jun 29, 2008 3:10 am | |
| Yeah looks ok but may to messy and busy for me try keeping it smooth and simple mate  Render looks ok but the spatter needs to be more obvious try adding some like clipping mask spatter aswell mate BG is bad sorry but there are to many brushes colours that dont fit Text is ok again a little messy though KIU | |
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| | Subject: Re: Carlos Vela//Mexico//.SIN Sun Jun 29, 2008 3:12 am | |
| it looks ok mate.
Whats the name of the font u used? | |
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| | Subject: Re: Carlos Vela//Mexico//.SIN Wed Jul 16, 2008 7:09 pm | |
| its great and my favorite team is mexico | |
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