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| | Subject: Re: Dirk Kuyt Fri Jul 04, 2008 2:49 pm | |
| Sorry mate i dont really like it- it looks a bit too grainy and the i dont really like the black and white. If you want to use this style it usually fits better when you have decent lighting effects  Try and add some next time. Text needs improvements too - you cant read it that well and it looks a bit simple. The stroke looks bad. The Bg is a bi simple and as i said a bit grainy. The Border can be improved. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Dirk Kuyt Fri Jul 04, 2008 3:12 pm | |
| thx m8 but i didnt love it so much  | |
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| | Subject: Re: Dirk Kuyt Fri Jul 04, 2008 4:04 pm | |
| Hmm You Can Do Better IMO,If You Added Colour It Would Look So Much Better,The Grungy Texture As SFX Said Is A Bit Too Grainy Maybe Place It Behind The Render It Doesn't Fit Over It IMO,Not Much Effects On The Render,Needs More Lighting And Texture Work,The Text Is Nice Keep It Up Mate! | |
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| | Subject: Re: Dirk Kuyt Fri Jul 04, 2008 5:06 pm | |
| To be honest, i really like it. The b/w thing works good in my opinion. Aswell as the gryngy thing. If you darkened the sides alot, i think it would be great. The text looks nice, fits well. Maybe tip it, think that could look good. Keep it up, mate  | |
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