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| Subject: Re: Anderson // Brazil // Collab Sat Jul 05, 2008 8:22 am | |
| Sorry Mates Not Really A Fan Of this One,The BG Looks Far To Busy It's Hard To Make Out Textures Etc,The Render Looks Okay Could Do With Some Blending The Effects Are Fine,The Text Looks A Bit Too Tubish If You Know What I Mean You Both Can Do Alot Better IMO Keep It Up! | |
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| Subject: Re: Anderson // Brazil // Collab Sat Jul 05, 2008 9:53 am | |
| Im not really a fan either mate soz, you've overdone it quite a bit imo. The bg is too crowded with textures, you should keep it quite simple. Theres like, too much colour. Render effects look nice. Shadow render doesnt really fit. Text could be better it looks like it has a really bad bevel. The 19 really doesnt fit Some of it kinda looks a bit too high contrast as well mate Oh and is it just me or is there one clipping mask on the bottom but not the top? Dunno if thats intentional.. Kiu | |
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| Subject: Re: Anderson // Brazil // Collab Sat Jul 05, 2008 10:04 am | |
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