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 |  Subject: Bojan Krkiic  Sun Aug 31, 2008 9:23 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: Bojan Krkiic Mon Sep 01, 2008 3:46 pm | |
| The render looks quite nice, the effects are good. The line texture isnt really fitting, though. I would move the render more in the middle aswell, alot space on the left that isnt used for anything. Background could be better, looks alittle boring. Put some more textures, pics, text or something like that in there. Text could be better aswell, looks alittle too simple. You've dont this style quite a while now, try something different, else you'll never get better at text  Make the border bigger, and maybe add some lightning. | |
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