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 |  Subject: Frank Lampard  Wed Jul 16, 2008 4:31 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: Frank Lampard Wed Jul 16, 2008 5:24 am | |
| Nice To See You Trying New Styles Mate,But This One Isn't Executed Too Well,The BG Is Too Dark And Empty Needs Some Texture Work There,The Render Looks Oversaturated The Effects Could Be Better,Texture Work Is Okay,The Text Looks Quite Bad It's Hard To See And I Don' Really Like The Font,Keep At It Mate!  | |
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| | Subject: Re: Frank Lampard Wed Jul 16, 2008 12:23 pm | |
| The render effects look okay, but is way overdone. The picture looks abit low quality, especially on his head. Background is too dark, not very interresting to look at. Text is too light, darken it down abit. Nice idea, though. Keep practising, mate  | |
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| | Subject: Re: Frank Lampard Wed Jul 16, 2008 1:51 pm | |
| The render effects look a bit too overdone and high contrast ans the dark bg really doesnt help it mate, sorry. You should lighten up the bg and tone it down a bit, including the text. It looks too bright and hard to read. The clipping mask doesnt really work either.. keep trying mate | |
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