Sergio Ramos

Not bad mate here but a little busy and messy in places Well the render seems a little bright and the face is to red tbh mate Try adding some smooth textures, colours and also light work mate Not sure on the bg the wood texture doesnt really fit in this kind of signature mate try adding some lines and brushes for the bg. Text is bad though all over the place aswell mate try keeping it simple KIU

Not Bad Mate,Too Messy Overall Tbh,The BG Doesn't Look Nice The Wood Texture Does Not Fit With The Red Colour And Diagnol Lines!,The Render Looks A Bit Too Red Aswell,The Effects Need Work,Not Sure About Those Lights On His Arms Etc.The Texts Look Too Draft And Messy Remove Them Mate.Keep At It!

Thanks for the feedback.
What does Tbh means?

It means To Be Honest

Made another version

V2:

Not bad. But still to messy in parts. Imo it is to red. The BG is ok but could be better. The text is bad and dosen't fit try and get maybe just one main text. The lighting effects are ok but could be improved. The double is ok but imo it dosen't fit here. The border is good KIU mate.

Not bad, the scan lines stand out to much imo, just lower the opacity, but the textures look fine, border looks good and the text is beter than v1 but still could be improved, keep practicing mate.