Hmm I'm Quite Unsure On This One Mate,The BG Looks Okay But Add More Lights,The Render Looks Okay The Effects Could Be Better,I Like The Spatter Maybe Overdone Tho But Thats Part Of The Style So I'll Say No More.I Like The Colours And Textures You Have Used Aswell,The text Looks Fine Add More Lights To It Tho,Keep It Up Mate!