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 |  Subject: David Villa sig.  Sun Jul 13, 2008 9:25 am | |
|  C+C are welcome.
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| | Subject: Re: David Villa sig. Sun Jul 13, 2008 9:31 am | |
| You got some good ideas mate, but i think you could execute better, and you have done better too  - For exampe the render, you kinda need to blend it a little more into the background, making it 'stick' less out, give it some textures and such  - The sharpen look a little harsh too, try tune it down, yeah. The text is okay, (you used my tut  ), i like the typo, fine and simple, The white text is fine and the font is okay, but i think the Villa text should be another font, maybe a little smoother And im actually not so sure on the clipping mask. The background is okay, but it's kinda lacking something, like a stadium, or something else maybe? - The colors is actually fine, maybe a little too much, but a really good idea. Cheers mate, keep it up! | |
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| | Subject: Re: David Villa sig. Sun Jul 13, 2008 10:05 am | |
| I completely agree with skrapzee's post ^
This can be continued but with more ideas. The textures you've used are quite nice but they need to go more over the render. The render looks ok but the desaturated head doesnt really work and its too sharpened. In fact the text is very sharpened too. The text itself looks ok, but its a bit simple and i dont like the stroke and shadow. I think you could blend the render with the bg more and make the bg more exciting, maybe darker and with some lighting effects. KIU | |
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| | Subject: Re: David Villa sig. Sun Jul 13, 2008 1:37 pm | |
| - .SFX wrote:
- I completely agree with skrapzee's post ^
This can be continued but with more ideas. The textures you've used are quite nice but they need to go more over the render. The render looks ok but the desaturated head doesnt really work and its too sharpened. In fact the text is very sharpened too. The text itself looks ok, but its a bit simple and i dont like the stroke and shadow. I think you could blend the render with the bg more and make the bg more exciting, maybe darker and with some lighting effects. KIU Who  Thanks for your comments, guys. I'll take it on board to improve my 'skills' | |
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| | Subject: Re: David Villa sig. Sun Jul 13, 2008 5:45 pm | |
| Not Bad Mate But I Completely Agree With Theb Others Needs A Little Blending ,Some More Texture Work,And Tone Down The Sharpening Abit Keep At It Mate! | |
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