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 |  Subject: David Villa  Sat Jul 05, 2008 7:33 pm | |
|  my 2nd in that style =l.. the first is so bad hausa i was practing. | |
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| | Subject: Re: David Villa Sun Jul 06, 2008 2:18 am | |
| It's not that bad i kinda like the grungy look of it  The lightings nice. At the top i reckon you could do a focal point between the lines  Text is nice. And it's blended well. Render works great. I reckon you could add more textures in to it though. The bg's nice. But perhaps make it more yellow on the left. Colours are great. Love the grungy colours of it. Kiu mate  | |
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| | Subject: Re: David Villa Sun Jul 06, 2008 7:21 am | |
| Nice Sig Mate But You've Done Alot Better IMO,The BG Looks To Be The Only Main Fault Could Do With More Colour Added To It,The Render Looks Really Great Texture And Lighting Work,The Text Is Blended Really Well And Looks Fine Keep Up The Good Work Mate! | |
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| | Subject: Re: David Villa Sun Jul 06, 2008 7:39 am | |
| Agree with Tiempo, you've done better, but it looks nice. Effects are okay, maybe are abit weird. You cant see where the render is stopping. The background looks very nice, special and unique. The text looks nice, abit hard to see the 'Villa' part though. The lightning is nice, but the white thing down at the right corner is too visible, turn the opacity down alittle. Keep it up, mate | |
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